The Sep. 6th post was before we had agreed to release various bits of information. Since then several issues have come up and I have decided to rewrite the story outline (rather, restructure it and adress several issues). For instance, there is a conflict on the new planet and the original plan of action didn't make much sense. Plus, the explanation for the random explosion disaster didn't work and was part of the original conflict in the story so after several suggestions as to how to make the explosions work a new version was warranted.
Also, there is a colony that is very important to the story that was not mentioned much in the outline which is another thing that needed to be adressed. Essentially the original outline made references to this important colony but essentially it was left out. The new outline includes the colony.
Also, the opening to the story was rather weak but the ending was decent. The new outline balances the start/end much better than the original.
Right now, it's a matter of actually getting myself to sit down and finish writting it. It's not easy and is almost a daunting task (there's a lot to rewrite) but it's definatly in the works!